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[kull222]

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im soo confused as to what material this is, if it is leather which is looking like it is trying to be why would soembody unless they are into that sorta thing wear this espesh like a 12 year old girl it looks rather odd me thinkings and also your defining the edges of your creases to much, its making it look fudgy/dodgy. also it still looks a bit young boyish which admitadly some young girls can look like but meh go full hog and make her look like a her as much as you can.

sorry if i sound harsh its just this piece is gettign good and has potential, it shows you know technical know how but i think ya just need to think about things abit more. maybe get any and everyone in your house whatver gae to look at it and see there reactions dont be embarrsed just ask them what they think of this character dont bog down there minds with"oh before you look at this let me just tell you blah blah blah...." just look at there reactions...maybe

either way gettting there keep going.

(edit: also just noticed the supposaed wrinkles around the neck/collar/hood. they are affectying the normal map at the moment but not the actual siloheutte, this is an area i think would be idealy pushed in and oute see we see the wrinkle depth not just the wrinkle-ness.) ya know what i mean.

Edited by kull222, 28 December 2011 - 07:39 PM.

[theflamingdude]

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im soo confused as to what material this is, if it is leather which is looking like it is trying to be why would soembody unless they are into that sorta thing wear this espesh like a 12 year old girl it looks rather odd me thinkings and also your defining the edges of your creases to much, its making it look fudgy/dodgy. also it still looks a bit young boyish which admitadly some young girls can look like but meh go full hog and make her look like a her as much as you can.

sorry if i sound harsh its just this piece is gettign good and has potential, it shows you know technical know how but i think ya just need to think about things abit more. maybe get any and everyone in your house whatver gae to look at it and see there reactions dont be embarrsed just ask them what they think of this character dont bog down there minds with"oh before you look at this let me just tell you blah blah blah...." just look at there reactions...maybe

either way gettting there keep going.

(edit: also just noticed the supposaed wrinkles around the neck/collar/hood. they are affectying the normal map at the moment but not the actual siloheutte, this is an area i think would be idealy pushed in and oute see we see the wrinkle depth not just the wrinkle-ness.) ya know what i mean.

Thanks jim, really useful feedback! The coat is supposed to be a raincoat, so very plasticy and not leather, but I've had a hard time trying to work out how to bring that across. Parhaps I'll deaden the dirt in the diffuse, and just keep it mainly in the spec map? and yeh my wrinkle-fu needs much work! I see where ur coming from with the bad wrinkle lines, I'll clean those up, and I'll see if I can get some more shape into those hood creases.

As for making her more girl-ish, I probably want to change the hair the most, as it was pretty much a 5min job and needs a lot more thought into it heh.

[LittleClaude]

Where is your group project thread?

[LittleClaude]

[kull222]

those concepts are instantly very similar.