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[The Fifth Patriot]

Just starting a thread for our film idea. Its the one about the kid and guy in the desert. Will put up a synopsis later

[The Fifth Patriot]

Hey guys heres a few concepts our concept artist did and we were hoping you could give us some crit on the proportions as their is some dispute within the group atm lol. The actual design isnt finished so will put them up once we've got the proportions correct. The concept is of a kid in his early teens and is essentially living on the streets although it will make more sense once the synopsis is up

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Edited by The Fifth Patriot, 11 November 2011 - 05:59 PM.

[The Fifth Patriot]

Hey guys, this is my wip for the kid, its heavily based on franky from the goon and there are still a lot of changes to make. All crits welcome

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[kull222]

two things that is a very big mouth, and also on those previous character designs it really forced my eyes to strain to see the differnreces between them both, it was like playing spot the difference lol. i do like the character however.

[The Fifth Patriot]

Not sure what you mean about the character designs sorry lol. All the character designs above are of the same character, we just wanted help on which proportions we should have for the design. And yeah, I reckon i'll make the mouth smaller, i'll put up some more renders tomorrow Cheers for the crit.

Edited by The Fifth Patriot, 13 November 2011 - 01:00 AM.

[kull222]

yeah it was just at first glance i was like what is differnt in them all.

[The Fifth Patriot]

haha fair doos

[The Fifth Patriot]

Just quickly gave it a smaller mouth to see the difference, better or worse?

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Edited by The Fifth Patriot, 13 November 2011 - 01:20 AM.

[The Fifth Patriot]

Hey guys just a quick update on how the character is coming. Still need to do a fair bit to the guy but so far so good. Will re-work the fingers and shirt better, and will tweak the head a little probably lol

Edited by The Fifth Patriot, 15 November 2011 - 10:07 PM.

[The Fifth Patriot]

Thought i'd put up my showreel as most of the stuff in it is for our film

Edited by Aldarion, 14 December 2011 - 02:26 PM.
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[RandomViper41]

theres some major stretching on the back of the vending machine, also with your head turn around theres alot of flicker on your contour lines but if you turn up over sampling in contour sets within render sets all should be fine

[The Fifth Patriot]

ahhh yeah, on my next turn around im not gonna show the back of the vending machine, i didnt texture it since its not going to be seen in the showreel but forgot to not show it in this lol. I just ended up rushing the rendering of the contour lines so will make it all better in the next version Cheers for the crit